ENGLISH
REFLECTION
In English, decided to put the creative writing on this digital portfolio. We were all reading a novel called “I am David”, a story about a boy who ran away from a camp and his journey to survive and seek for his mother. In the novel, the start was not very clear and it looks like it’s some sequel of another book. Apparently, we don’t know the before story and the after story so in this assignment, we are supposed to make an after story or a before story. I made a before story, some sort of very short prequel about “I am David”. I think I did well in this assignment, though I think I still have some more to improve. I had several corrections and I peer-checked with my friend whose English class is higher then me. I got a five, which I think is quite good for me myself, but I know I still had more to improve. I did well in the plot of the story, and I met the minimum of the word limit, and so I did quite well. Although some parts are not clear, my friend suggests about some additional part that she made to make the story makes sense. I have some grammatical errors, spelling errors and also some punctuation errors. This is what I have to improve in next assignment of writing, so I can get a higher score next time.
In English, decided to put the creative writing on this digital portfolio. We were all reading a novel called “I am David”, a story about a boy who ran away from a camp and his journey to survive and seek for his mother. In the novel, the start was not very clear and it looks like it’s some sequel of another book. Apparently, we don’t know the before story and the after story so in this assignment, we are supposed to make an after story or a before story. I made a before story, some sort of very short prequel about “I am David”. I think I did well in this assignment, though I think I still have some more to improve. I had several corrections and I peer-checked with my friend whose English class is higher then me. I got a five, which I think is quite good for me myself, but I know I still had more to improve. I did well in the plot of the story, and I met the minimum of the word limit, and so I did quite well. Although some parts are not clear, my friend suggests about some additional part that she made to make the story makes sense. I have some grammatical errors, spelling errors and also some punctuation errors. This is what I have to improve in next assignment of writing, so I can get a higher score next time.