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Country Essay - Paraguay EssayOverall from the essay, I would say this is not a very nice essay. I remembered the teacher said that it has a good point though. I think what I need to improve from this essay is the language of the essay. I don’t use a large range of vocab and I don’t apply new words to the essay. Most words are repeated in the next paragraph and the next one again, and I think I need to improve myself in writing essays. I need to read more to learn new words, also to learn the grammar that is right. I think this is both the negative and positive side of the essay. What I learned is how to make an informative essay. It's sometimes hard to collect the information we want, resulting in lack of information in the final result. So if I would score this work, I would give it a passing score but not too well. Maybe a four to myself because I know this isn’t the maximum effort. I need to be more intelligent and focus in doing schoolwork next time.
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